I’ve been mulling over what to talk about at my upcoming Book Launch Party for my second book in The Saving Mars Series—DEFYING MARS. Now, I happen to know there will be a sizeable number of people there of whom it could be said, “Fans of Sci/Fi, they are not.” (Nor, I suspect, do their desks look like this.)
So that got me to thinking about how, when I wrote the first book, I told myself, “I’ve got to work extra hard to make sure the characters are front and center—and unforgettable.” Okay, that might have been something my sister said to me (in the imperative form) now that I think about it… But in either case, I wrote with the idea firmly in my mind.
I knew the book would have a title that SCREAMED Sci/Fi and was pretty sure the cover art would reflect that as well. But I didn’t have a following of people who were committed readers of Sci/Fi. No, I had readers who loved my contemporary fantasy and occasionally remarked upon its almost Sci/Fi feel.
What to do?
Well, it all came down to that first line, really. I figured I would either gain or lose readers based on the first paragraph, and even more particularly, based on that first line. Do any of you remember it?
She was the kind of girl who slept with books on her bed.
See what I did there? If you’ve read the blurb or looked at the cover, you know this is a book about a firecracker pilot obsessed with flying. Who lives on Mars. That makes her pretty hard to relate to for, oh, say, 99% of my readers. So I didn’t want to start my book with a line like, “She was the sort of pilot who took action first and apologized later.”
And while the above statement is true about Jessamyn, there are other statements that describe her in a way that is more relatable to my existing audience (and to new readers, as well.) So I went with a couple of paragraphs talking about her addiction to reading—something most readers can relate to.
This isn’t to say that all first lines must be relatable. Let’s take a look at the first line of my first book, RIPPLER:
The screaming was the first clue that I’d turned invisible again.
Now, most of us can’t relate to the kind of invisibility Samantha is talking about in that opening line. But Sam, unlike Jess, is a girl set in a very familiar world. We did a very recognizable kind of cover for that book: girl in flowing white dress facing away. This book’s cover and title appeal to an existing readership within YA. (Readers of paranormal romance and fantasy.) So I wanted that first line to be a bit more pick-you-up-and-shake-you-by-the-shoulders.
So there you have it. Even if you can’t make it to Eugene, Oregon for my Book Launch Party, now you can pretend you heard me give the above talk. (Read it aloud if that helps.)
What are some of your favorite first lines? Here’s one of mine:
“It is the first day of November and so, today, someone will die.”
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7 Replies to “When First Lines Matter”
“I’d never given much thought to how I would die – though I’d had reason enough in the last few months – but even if I had, I would not have imagined it like this.”
I have a lot of favorite books, but honestly my favorite first line is probably Saving Mars! 😛
Yes! My plan to conquer the world using only the first line of a book is WORKING!!! Mwa-ha-ha-ha-ha!
I read ALOT of books, and the beginnings are all great, but I just read rippler and I will say the first line had me hooked 🙂 “The screaming was the first clue that I’d turned iinvisible again” Love it!
Yay, Isabel! (Also, see my earlier comment and imagine maniacal laughter.)
“There are days when it is appropriate to stomp the hell out of a frog, and days when it is just better not to.” (WWSD – Anthony Miller) I knew before I picked up the book that this was going to be a comical take on life where Satan is a goofy relatable character trapped in his own personal hell on Earth. Normally a line like that would revolt me, but knowing the kind of book it was – that first line grabbed me and made me take notice!!!
Congratulations to Heather! I think you will love this book. Well, I think everyone would love this book, pretty much. Let me know if I’m right!